My annoyed composition is 300 words
in the growth process of our everybody, all constitute to°from the happiness and annoyance.Happiness and annoyance constituted our fine childhoods.I introduce my annoyance for everyone now!
every day in early morning, I will get up to have a class.And every day release from school to go home teachers will set out a pile of homework, I face these homeworks to do hard every day do, want to attain 10:00 or 9:30 every evening.This this a pile of homework will oppress every day of I breathe heavily however annoy.
still have already let me annoyed affair is an examination.Because the result is bad, examination seem to be very exhausting, whenever examine none of result is very good, but the Mom and Dad all take to heart my result, each time I examination go home them will ask my result.
remember last time, my mathematics result tested for 65 centses.That time of I don't dare to go home, vacant on the way home have no walking of Cuo.Feel the way home is very endless
result I return to a house, the mother jubilantly runs to ask me the result.But when the time that knows my result, I saw the mother's noodles all become green.Give me a cold shoulder later on.Father calls me to the den to go after knowing after coming back and ruthlessly ascended for me one section thought lesson.I oath solemnly pledged of promise father to like study, just finally can relieve.
sometimes am I wanting to study really and so importance?It makes my life increase much annoyance.Order to review:
pass the author's introduction, we also saw the author's annoyance, these vexing not only for author existence, believe to all exist to the many people.So the author wants to actively overcome.
Wednesday, February 11, 2015
Visit insect museum
Visit insect museum
I went to insect museum on January 12, 2013, kid at the time of gathering, teacher Tian asked everyone a question, that be:What characteristic does the insect have?Have been seeing various insect son at ordinary times, can really not know that what insect is.Some kids with great enthusiasmly raise hand to say:The insect contains 6 feet, 2 antennae and a rightness of wings.The teacher lets the body of our basis these insects advertise for, treating will slowly discover, also tell us the insect to be constituted by head, chest and stomach three parts.
after waiting kids all and arriving together, the teacher leads us first to a laboratory and makes us observe the body of butterfly in the microscope underneath.Microscope too magic, it can small of the thing enlarge a lot of times, I stare at with awe.We still did butterfly specimen, the teacher sent to we, let us stay to make to be in remembrance of, I write on the postcard ascend mother, because I want to send to the mother.
connected down us to finally get into museum, I saw very beautiful big and blue Shan Die, I knew the most expensive is also the most beautiful butterfly in the world call bright fairy Die.I still studied butterfly and the differentiation of E:Butterfly is appear in the daytime, butterfly and the sun are good friends, E is appear in the evening, E and moon are good friends;The butterfly stops next of time the wing is closing of, the E stops next of time the wing is a piece wear of pass to visit me to still know ant, cicada and butterfly, cricket and Guo the Guo is an insect, while the spider, centipede then isn't an insect.
arrive at an insect museum visit today, I feel very meaningful, there is an interest lesson of Die skill in our school and pass today's visit, I fancied butterfly, I really want to take part in Die skill lesson, I must say to the mother after returning to.
I went to insect museum on January 12, 2013, kid at the time of gathering, teacher Tian asked everyone a question, that be:What characteristic does the insect have?Have been seeing various insect son at ordinary times, can really not know that what insect is.Some kids with great enthusiasmly raise hand to say:The insect contains 6 feet, 2 antennae and a rightness of wings.The teacher lets the body of our basis these insects advertise for, treating will slowly discover, also tell us the insect to be constituted by head, chest and stomach three parts.
after waiting kids all and arriving together, the teacher leads us first to a laboratory and makes us observe the body of butterfly in the microscope underneath.Microscope too magic, it can small of the thing enlarge a lot of times, I stare at with awe.We still did butterfly specimen, the teacher sent to we, let us stay to make to be in remembrance of, I write on the postcard ascend mother, because I want to send to the mother.
connected down us to finally get into museum, I saw very beautiful big and blue Shan Die, I knew the most expensive is also the most beautiful butterfly in the world call bright fairy Die.I still studied butterfly and the differentiation of E:Butterfly is appear in the daytime, butterfly and the sun are good friends, E is appear in the evening, E and moon are good friends;The butterfly stops next of time the wing is closing of, the E stops next of time the wing is a piece wear of pass to visit me to still know ant, cicada and butterfly, cricket and Guo the Guo is an insect, while the spider, centipede then isn't an insect.
arrive at an insect museum visit today, I feel very meaningful, there is an interest lesson of Die skill in our school and pass today's visit, I fancied butterfly, I really want to take part in Die skill lesson, I must say to the mother after returning to.
Shield from wind a person who block rain for us
Shield from wind a person who block rain for us
the weather is to change the continuous, probably this a moment still is raining, rain a moment to blow breeze, as well or the sun shine in glory the earth also perhaps, the road of life like the weather general, not is always the sun, also not is to have been raining, have been blowing more
the road of life like the road of our foot general, is not likely to have been straight, while meeting branch road, we nearby always someone indicate an advanced direction for us, for us cover this all the way of rains and winds, let us peaceful alignment front.
from our birth beginning, we fully receive great favors love, so can say that we are to have been steeping the kid who grow up in the bottle in the honey, at we this takes of in the kid, we 90% Be or so to is all only sons and daughters of in home, so the whole family's love all concentration on our bodies.
we are happy, but our happiness is under the environment that creates for us at the parents, the rains and winds of the external world could not beat in our body, we don't understand a difficulty, didn't not know to worry after rains and winds why thing, need to pay how much while resisting rains and winds.
the parents are the persons who shields from wind to block rain for us, we should be born firmly in mind to heart, and we should thoroughly requite our parents.Order to review:
the truth Be plain to easily understand, parable vivid image, the article structure is careful, the language is flowing freely.
the weather is to change the continuous, probably this a moment still is raining, rain a moment to blow breeze, as well or the sun shine in glory the earth also perhaps, the road of life like the weather general, not is always the sun, also not is to have been raining, have been blowing more
the road of life like the road of our foot general, is not likely to have been straight, while meeting branch road, we nearby always someone indicate an advanced direction for us, for us cover this all the way of rains and winds, let us peaceful alignment front.
from our birth beginning, we fully receive great favors love, so can say that we are to have been steeping the kid who grow up in the bottle in the honey, at we this takes of in the kid, we 90% Be or so to is all only sons and daughters of in home, so the whole family's love all concentration on our bodies.
we are happy, but our happiness is under the environment that creates for us at the parents, the rains and winds of the external world could not beat in our body, we don't understand a difficulty, didn't not know to worry after rains and winds why thing, need to pay how much while resisting rains and winds.
the parents are the persons who shields from wind to block rain for us, we should be born firmly in mind to heart, and we should thoroughly requite our parents.Order to review:
the truth Be plain to easily understand, parable vivid image, the article structure is careful, the language is flowing freely.
Saturday, January 3, 2015
our leader of class
our leader of class
our leader of class-Long Ge, grow a tiger head tiger brain, clever lovely.Not only grow well, the person appears in public love, also widely read much just, it make people admire.
regardless the Long Ge size examine the first always, so we have a nickname for him to call "test absolute being"."Test absolute being" really not the Kui is absolute being.A few days ago the whole school holds a reading contest, Long Ge obtained the good result of first in about 100 people, the score that compares in the second place is fully many 6.5 cents, far away leading, let people admit defeat.Reading a contest is remarkable, to need to be read widely, the knowledge noodles widely just goes of, Long Ge almost tested full marks, let us absolutely admired to him complete prostration, we worship him to be like to worship absolute being."Test absolute being""test absolute being", give our strength, having you the half is severe, we need not worry to examine.
Long Ge not only study well, also versatile, each time no matter it is school or class activity, he always host.He chairs a various meeting proficient, visit blade enough to spare.He not only manage a program, sometimes still arrange in order a program, perform a program, we absolutely admire to him can not terminology speech expression.Really is "absolute being"!
Long Ge is everything all very good, we all really worship him!
that heavy rain, I stand on the street photogenic fall difficult Sun Wukong, the for-rent cars drive to each one all yell:Teacher! Mistake area a:Leave, big, empty this year Gao Kao's composition, ask examinee to write the thought of he or she's reality.The expert points out that discover in recent years that the phenomenon that the examinee draws up details is more universal, some examinees are sympathetic toward for Bo high mark, don't hesitate to draw up, such as parents in the home "divorce", false details like the "death", it is a plait to see very obviously;The examinee who still has frequently draws up some oddly fantastic stories, like star war, future world etc..This article may "meet rejection" very much this year. Expert points out that a composition can move to grade examination papers a teacher and get a high mark, the factor is various.The emotion earnestness is also initial, even if come from living virtual scene, should include solid feeling of genuine feeling.Those leave words, exaggeration, empty talk and set the words are necessarily unpopular. Mistake area two:Imitate, set, copy in recent years, some examinees embrace by luck mental, facing the field will carry on the back the next excellent piece to carry on imitating to build before testing, the set copy, this kind of phenomenon aroused the deep concern of grading examination papers the teacher and reviewed rule rules this year, once discovering in order to plagiarize a work, the composition will make serious handle, until judge zero to divide. The expert said that the examinee is much forer reference to read that Fan Wen has a necessity, but the key lies in from surmise an article purpose and conceive outline among them, study language and description for oneself use, not the mimicry, set copies a contents. Mistake area three:Choose a material old"the material is fresh" is this year the request of the Gao Kao composition material, it investigates if the examinee's reading is extensive and pays attention to towards living whether.Gao Kao in the recent years is grading examination papers, usually discover that the examinee is in the aspects of selecting by examinations material "old 1 set", enumerates of example is once used must a time, like Qu-Yuan, thunder Feng, reside inside the madam's examples all appear frequency very high.Again then, parts of examinees like to pile up material in the composition, but lack to aim at sexual of analytical argument, so empty composition again is not likely to get a high mark. To write a China chapter that is flexible to have soul the expert suggests that the examinee can put the vision to nearby:Grow up road, nearby the personnels can become writing a material. Mistake area four:The literary style weird topic composition is an unlimited literary style of, hence some examinees passed examination in Gao, "strange literary style" also appeared and not agreed with the norm of matching a kind of any literary style and became"nondescript";Moreover then once the examinee wish innovation, write the composition of but is contents and form to seriously not agree with. The expert said that Gao passes examination innovation can, but should notice 2:00:One is a literary style form must match with contents;Two is to since choose a kind of literary style, should according to the characteristics of literary style, request to launch a writing.
our leader of class
our leader of class-Long Ge, grow a tiger head tiger brain, clever lovely.Not only grow well, the person appears in public love, also widely read much just, it make people admire.
regardless the Long Ge size examine the first always, so we have a nickname for him to call "test absolute being"."Test absolute being" really not the Kui is absolute being.A few days ago the whole school holds a reading contest, Long Ge obtained the good result of first in about 100 people, the score that compares in the second place is fully many 6.5 cents, far away leading, let people admit defeat.Reading a contest is remarkable, to need to be read widely, the knowledge noodles widely just goes of, Long Ge almost tested full marks, let us absolutely admired to him complete prostration, we worship him to be like to worship absolute being."Test absolute being""test absolute being", give our strength, having you the half is severe, we need not worry to examine.
Long Ge not only study well, also versatile, each time no matter it is school or class activity, he always host.He chairs a various meeting proficient, visit blade enough to spare.He not only manage a program, sometimes still arrange in order a program, perform a program, we absolutely admire to him can not terminology speech expression.Really is "absolute being"!
Long Ge is everything all very good, we all really worship him!
that heavy rain, I stand on the street photogenic fall difficult Sun Wukong, the for-rent cars drive to each one all yell:Teacher! Mistake area a:Leave, big, empty this year Gao Kao's composition, ask examinee to write the thought of he or she's reality.The expert points out that discover in recent years that the phenomenon that the examinee draws up details is more universal, some examinees are sympathetic toward for Bo high mark, don't hesitate to draw up, such as parents in the home "divorce", false details like the "death", it is a plait to see very obviously;The examinee who still has frequently draws up some oddly fantastic stories, like star war, future world etc..This article may "meet rejection" very much this year. Expert points out that a composition can move to grade examination papers a teacher and get a high mark, the factor is various.The emotion earnestness is also initial, even if come from living virtual scene, should include solid feeling of genuine feeling.Those leave words, exaggeration, empty talk and set the words are necessarily unpopular. Mistake area two:Imitate, set, copy in recent years, some examinees embrace by luck mental, facing the field will carry on the back the next excellent piece to carry on imitating to build before testing, the set copy, this kind of phenomenon aroused the deep concern of grading examination papers the teacher and reviewed rule rules this year, once discovering in order to plagiarize a work, the composition will make serious handle, until judge zero to divide. The expert said that the examinee is much forer reference to read that Fan Wen has a necessity, but the key lies in from surmise an article purpose and conceive outline among them, study language and description for oneself use, not the mimicry, set copies a contents. Mistake area three:Choose a material old"the material is fresh" is this year the request of the Gao Kao composition material, it investigates if the examinee's reading is extensive and pays attention to towards living whether.Gao Kao in the recent years is grading examination papers, usually discover that the examinee is in the aspects of selecting by examinations material "old 1 set", enumerates of example is once used must a time, like Qu-Yuan, thunder Feng, reside inside the madam's examples all appear frequency very high.Again then, parts of examinees like to pile up material in the composition, but lack to aim at sexual of analytical argument, so empty composition again is not likely to get a high mark. To write a China chapter that is flexible to have soul the expert suggests that the examinee can put the vision to nearby:Grow up road, nearby the personnels can become writing a material. Mistake area four:The literary style weird topic composition is an unlimited literary style of, hence some examinees passed examination in Gao, "strange literary style" also appeared and not agreed with the norm of matching a kind of any literary style and became"nondescript";Moreover then once the examinee wish innovation, write the composition of but is contents and form to seriously not agree with. The expert said that Gao passes examination innovation can, but should notice 2:00:One is a literary style form must match with contents;Two is to since choose a kind of literary style, should according to the characteristics of literary style, request to launch a writing.
The strength of a drop of water
The strength of a drop of water
if someone asks now:Drown a person to need how much water?I will don't hestitate a ground of answer:1 drop!Doubts in the other party of I also act with due care and respect ground to add a way in the middle of the vision:Needs 1 drop!1 drop!Foot Yi!If oneself has fascination to also take into to explain:If the drop is in the fitting position.
this really not is brain teasers, also not is a joke.Involve a person the dead lives of matter, I am to smile don't come out.
academic stanza on schedule such as have been already started, the teachers of each forum carry on an end with meticulous care to prepare, from dress to station, from voice to facial appearance, the matter has no accompany thin.Everyone's in the minds all have a certain rules, the detail decides success or failure.But for the activity matter like this, only an ascend a set to really disallow failure.
I come down from the on the stage and have no and the teachers from the same sets sit together, oneself finds out dime to fall alone in sit down.The in the mind is gloomy to come down.
oneself already continuously for three days without going home.The in the mind reads that young daughter.
do not is oneself willing soon thought desertion before going on stage, also have the idea thinks academic stanza outside of affair.Don't is a feeling bath as well so, but is really ability not from suppress.
the teachers of on the stage being like to walk Ma Deng Be similar to go up and down, busy.People of assembly hall doorway into pass in and out, the step is in a hurry.At present of everything gradual misty.My Zheng is big eyes, I put out strength Zheng big eyes, put out strength to raise head, offer oneself hard don't let eyes blink for a while.Assembly hall Peng the light of the crest is more and more hazy, flow to drip into the white Hua Hua one.The canthus was like an insect to just wake up to climb from the Qu hull, Yang Yang of, climbed to climb slowly and downward, along the cheeks got down.Skin on the furry small feet Mo Suo face of insect, more Yang Yang, that the felling have been spreading to cheeks from the canthus and go deep into skin and drill into thin blood vessel of each root hair, along the blood vessel has no a set to block forward and flies soon and forward, had been roving around till heart thorough.The in the mind is like to turn over a river to pour sea, already not Yang, is rise!Is stuffy!Rise all over sufferedly, stuffy get the viscera want to blast open, I stretch hand to hold tight the clothes of the front of chest, and tightly the Zuan becomes one regiment.My Song for a while shoulders, the rising of heart flows out to want to spray to spout but.
I tightly shut last eyes, another insect Quan shrinks body a jump but, tightly make track for a front of a , two beginning and ends connect with each other to along together get down.Feels corner of mouth a strange smell and then and continuously and to mouth permeate.Being salty is a bitterness, also is very tiny hot.I have already coulded not distinguish is what taste.
the academic stanza have been already started, the teachers of assembly hall on the stage respectively carry on the performance of familiar chain, under the set of the teachers seeming is also in earnest listenning to.All all theses have already canned not get into own eyes.My life was eventually like to get piece.
the call sign of several teachers from the same set forums just awaken from sink the dead I and lead around a few teachers look askance at surprised Cha ground to looking at me.
still remember the city language teacher's cultivated manners for big match period, oneself has never gone home continuously for a week.Can not bear to recall on that week.The colleague pays no attention of a:How to split your face?I have no to answer by making.
also remember that the last term studies to the Nanking.That day morning of fresh and cool still refreshing up to now own heart, face a first sun rays in the morning to send more than 10 months big daughter and the lover go to a kid maternal grandmother house, my embracing a kid , down the avenue, is sending to kid the time of kid's mother's bosom, kid ground call, in mouth keep shouting not, don't embraceses feet Deng, the eye full of tearsly looking at me.There is a drop of tears direct current that enter his/her own heart.Just split second, oneself is drowned the tears of having the kid in.Looking at a kid be embraced by the mother to walk, listen to the kid's shout, tears is from my eye eyes inside Yang.
can't forget, study a period in the Nanking, receive Yan the director's a message, the gist is to say, the children of class class is over see an airplane for sky on the drill ground, toghter and loudly stamp foot to shout:Teacher Zhao comes down, teacher Zhao comes down.The Yan director listens to the kid speak of this matter touched the tears keep turning in the rim of eye, can I saw a message but don't control at that time.
some I can not remember clearly and melt to contain what in that water.I know that my Yun contains endless of strength.If I have the power of choice, I can give up the Nanking study, I can not participate in academic stanza of make collective report.Is some I but can say purely, at the kid of own kid and the other people, I should do how of choice.But I can not do it.
if someone asks now:Drown a person to need how much water?I will don't hestitate a ground of answer:1 drop!Doubts in the other party of I also act with due care and respect ground to add a way in the middle of the vision:Needs 1 drop!1 drop!Foot Yi!If oneself has fascination to also take into to explain:If the drop is in the fitting position.
this really not is brain teasers, also not is a joke.Involve a person the dead lives of matter, I am to smile don't come out.
academic stanza on schedule such as have been already started, the teachers of each forum carry on an end with meticulous care to prepare, from dress to station, from voice to facial appearance, the matter has no accompany thin.Everyone's in the minds all have a certain rules, the detail decides success or failure.But for the activity matter like this, only an ascend a set to really disallow failure.
I come down from the on the stage and have no and the teachers from the same sets sit together, oneself finds out dime to fall alone in sit down.The in the mind is gloomy to come down.
oneself already continuously for three days without going home.The in the mind reads that young daughter.
do not is oneself willing soon thought desertion before going on stage, also have the idea thinks academic stanza outside of affair.Don't is a feeling bath as well so, but is really ability not from suppress.
the teachers of on the stage being like to walk Ma Deng Be similar to go up and down, busy.People of assembly hall doorway into pass in and out, the step is in a hurry.At present of everything gradual misty.My Zheng is big eyes, I put out strength Zheng big eyes, put out strength to raise head, offer oneself hard don't let eyes blink for a while.Assembly hall Peng the light of the crest is more and more hazy, flow to drip into the white Hua Hua one.The canthus was like an insect to just wake up to climb from the Qu hull, Yang Yang of, climbed to climb slowly and downward, along the cheeks got down.Skin on the furry small feet Mo Suo face of insect, more Yang Yang, that the felling have been spreading to cheeks from the canthus and go deep into skin and drill into thin blood vessel of each root hair, along the blood vessel has no a set to block forward and flies soon and forward, had been roving around till heart thorough.The in the mind is like to turn over a river to pour sea, already not Yang, is rise!Is stuffy!Rise all over sufferedly, stuffy get the viscera want to blast open, I stretch hand to hold tight the clothes of the front of chest, and tightly the Zuan becomes one regiment.My Song for a while shoulders, the rising of heart flows out to want to spray to spout but.
I tightly shut last eyes, another insect Quan shrinks body a jump but, tightly make track for a front of a , two beginning and ends connect with each other to along together get down.Feels corner of mouth a strange smell and then and continuously and to mouth permeate.Being salty is a bitterness, also is very tiny hot.I have already coulded not distinguish is what taste.
the academic stanza have been already started, the teachers of assembly hall on the stage respectively carry on the performance of familiar chain, under the set of the teachers seeming is also in earnest listenning to.All all theses have already canned not get into own eyes.My life was eventually like to get piece.
the call sign of several teachers from the same set forums just awaken from sink the dead I and lead around a few teachers look askance at surprised Cha ground to looking at me.
still remember the city language teacher's cultivated manners for big match period, oneself has never gone home continuously for a week.Can not bear to recall on that week.The colleague pays no attention of a:How to split your face?I have no to answer by making.
also remember that the last term studies to the Nanking.That day morning of fresh and cool still refreshing up to now own heart, face a first sun rays in the morning to send more than 10 months big daughter and the lover go to a kid maternal grandmother house, my embracing a kid , down the avenue, is sending to kid the time of kid's mother's bosom, kid ground call, in mouth keep shouting not, don't embraceses feet Deng, the eye full of tearsly looking at me.There is a drop of tears direct current that enter his/her own heart.Just split second, oneself is drowned the tears of having the kid in.Looking at a kid be embraced by the mother to walk, listen to the kid's shout, tears is from my eye eyes inside Yang.
can't forget, study a period in the Nanking, receive Yan the director's a message, the gist is to say, the children of class class is over see an airplane for sky on the drill ground, toghter and loudly stamp foot to shout:Teacher Zhao comes down, teacher Zhao comes down.The Yan director listens to the kid speak of this matter touched the tears keep turning in the rim of eye, can I saw a message but don't control at that time.
some I can not remember clearly and melt to contain what in that water.I know that my Yun contains endless of strength.If I have the power of choice, I can give up the Nanking study, I can not participate in academic stanza of make collective report.Is some I but can say purely, at the kid of own kid and the other people, I should do how of choice.But I can not do it.
Breeze breeze elder sister
Breeze breeze elder sister, make people Kua, blow to the four seasons to dedicate everyone.The spring breeze blows inside, a night in the garden, the Zhan opens a flower.The summer breeze blows garden pond side, lotus flower in the pond is happy ha ha.The autumnal winds blows inside in the forest, leaf God roseate clouds.The winter breeze blows a small village and covers with to start to float a light snow to spend.Two goods the girl friend went to my in home and visits for the first time yesterday, while having a meal asked belonging to of my father mutually is what.
I say:Is a Chinese Zodiac Sign inside most Mao of!Do you try and guess?
two goods girl friend even wanted to don't think and then directly answer:Donkey!
then see master son metal gray face, the others of table all directly suppress internal injury in the article describing scenery, the adequacy makes use of parable, personification, can get the scenery depiction more vivid. Personification, mean usage imagination, the thing be the person write.(Next 88)describe scenery with the personification method, can make scenery live a new life to move, image, increase the atmosphere of article.Using is personification, have to find out scenery and others' of a little bit alike. The parable is to make the another to a thing ratio and have a little bit alike thing with it, also call draw an analogy.The parable is used to really slice, plain easily understand, can make the scenery described more the beauty is moving, leave a deep and fresh clear impression for reader.To make parable accurate have to learn in the observation of the colleague launch association of thought:Want does this scenery what thing resemble with.Again want, they which places resemble, the likeness finding out both orders, the likeness point seeks accurately, parable also more accurate.Seek likeness to order, generally can consider as follows from several aspects:Outline likeness, color likeness, voice likeness, length size likeness, dynamic state alike etc..Please see nether excellent piece part: In spring, she is like the fairy maiden in the nursery tale.The defoliation of the light green of summit of hill is loose, be like the yarn towel of fairy maiden.The green tree between the mountains is like the green tunic of fairy maiden, the in the interval blooms of white pear flower, be like to embellish in the blossom of green tunic.Below the hills of the cherry flower bush is like the flower skirt of fairy maiden.Under the foot of a hill of one slice dandelion flower, be like fairy maiden the yellow wearing to embroider to spend shoe. The parable here is plain to easily understand, and combines the parable and the personification to use at a cake of, increased the vivid and interest of article more, at the same time, also better earth's surface reached the feeling of little author's fancy to spring.
I say:Is a Chinese Zodiac Sign inside most Mao of!Do you try and guess?
two goods girl friend even wanted to don't think and then directly answer:Donkey!
then see master son metal gray face, the others of table all directly suppress internal injury in the article describing scenery, the adequacy makes use of parable, personification, can get the scenery depiction more vivid. Personification, mean usage imagination, the thing be the person write.(Next 88)describe scenery with the personification method, can make scenery live a new life to move, image, increase the atmosphere of article.Using is personification, have to find out scenery and others' of a little bit alike. The parable is to make the another to a thing ratio and have a little bit alike thing with it, also call draw an analogy.The parable is used to really slice, plain easily understand, can make the scenery described more the beauty is moving, leave a deep and fresh clear impression for reader.To make parable accurate have to learn in the observation of the colleague launch association of thought:Want does this scenery what thing resemble with.Again want, they which places resemble, the likeness finding out both orders, the likeness point seeks accurately, parable also more accurate.Seek likeness to order, generally can consider as follows from several aspects:Outline likeness, color likeness, voice likeness, length size likeness, dynamic state alike etc..Please see nether excellent piece part: In spring, she is like the fairy maiden in the nursery tale.The defoliation of the light green of summit of hill is loose, be like the yarn towel of fairy maiden.The green tree between the mountains is like the green tunic of fairy maiden, the in the interval blooms of white pear flower, be like to embellish in the blossom of green tunic.Below the hills of the cherry flower bush is like the flower skirt of fairy maiden.Under the foot of a hill of one slice dandelion flower, be like fairy maiden the yellow wearing to embroider to spend shoe. The parable here is plain to easily understand, and combines the parable and the personification to use at a cake of, increased the vivid and interest of article more, at the same time, also better earth's surface reached the feeling of little author's fancy to spring.
Wednesday, December 24, 2014
Macau visit to record
Macau visit to record
summer vacation, we are from the bead sea arch north seaport lead maritime customs, go to tour in Macau.Let my impression the most deep has big the representative's building in Macau three Ba memorial arch and Macau's tallest tour tower.
big three Ba the memorial arch is Asian the biggest church of more than 100 year agos, because of be burned by the fire, remains a to face to the wall, is a historic monument just at present.Although it leave one noodles high big wall, very impressive-looking grand view, seem to be specially dominant under the sun, a lot of believing people all worship here and consign many people's hope.
Macau's tallest tour tower, we are the tower crest that ascends it in the evenings.We at tallest of 360 revolve a restaurant, Be enjoying dinner and appreciating the night scene of Macau.Have the 1 F sightseeing glass in the tower crest, can allow the visitor to trample up feeling, I stand on the glass floor to hope toward sole of foot, , be really a look at many mountains small, I saw be like an ant similar Qi car, such as matchbox similar house, have a little in the felling greatly terrified.That many-storied buildings in distances all shone a light, Macau was like the ocean of light, the world of light, be like a bright bright pearl.
in Macau, we still stroll science and technology building, nation father's memorial hall in Macau, Fisherman Warf, race car museum, person hotel in Wearnes
we have fun specially happily! A junior high school tests a composition and mostly includes a few steps:Review a purpose to choose a material to strive for a layout display literary grace.Strive for a layout this one-step solution among them of is how to arrange the problem of contents that contents and performance chooses.Arrange a contents mainly is to conceive outline the big structure and big frame of article for the material chosen, but express a contents then mainly is express a student by himself/herself to the comprehension and ego personality of material.I think that this is the beginning high school student should first explicit idea. Arranging the contents is the big frame that installs an article.Test a composition but speech for one, very sad urge of, the student has to follow give square the space a word a word upwards write.(Next 88)is also say, test a composition disallows an examinee truely and thoroughly exertion.The examinee's exertion have to under the mode fixed, these writings' making a show of in the square, square,'s just positive blank would seem to be enjoy to please the eye.But this needs to strive for an effort of layout. In the process of striving for a layout, it is the most important one step to write to lift a key link.Write to lift outline to notice two contentses:On being certain article topic and main contents, two is to give the article layering the cent segment, make sure at the same time contents each ly and mostly with probably word number.This lifts a key link ignore is truely write paper up still only in mind beat into a mental notes, have to promise ability at lifts and orderly puts in the key link into want to put of contents.The parable that beats an image, be have to have a big cupboard, there is the small blank of dissimilarity in each cupboard.Have to check a time of small space after filling with each small space a contents, will fill the too full place be divided into a lately small space again, will fill once big pen in the dissatisfied place(is also make a show of to the article to say a not strong place of performance dint) flick and sign a horse to hew away.This is to arrange a contents matter that need to be done. But so-called performance contents, say white, be let to arrange with the technique of expression the good thing truely become himself/herself.The common saying says that the sun underneath has no fresh matter.Particularly to beginning the high school student but speech, a lot of contentses written by it, is the life that all big parts of persons once experienced, so-so and light write down, in fact the new experience combines not much.(particularly graded examination papers a teacher to still once see so several compositions)At this time, need how express a contents, this flower dessert to think.Because, a purpose(particularly be this article isn't science and technology text) of article mainly lies in the special understanding that expresses oneself to some fixed and unchangealbe things.This understanding on the other hand gets to°from special life experience and on the other hand gets to°from the different technique of expression.I always think that the so-called technique of expression actually is a kind of way that treats thing or says to treat a life.You are to treat the living like this, therefore, you will come so to write.You are richer than dramatic, so compare to like better that the constitution hangs to read, the adoption narrates from the end skill;Because your emotion compares to like better a description detail for sensitive with enriching, so you comparing;You are more mature, see a problem more thorough, so you like the language sentence of judgment type.All of these are your personalities, even if in testing a field, also not should drive square blank Yan have no.The student can have according to own judgment consciously train 1-2 categories technique of expression, if give thing speech ambition, the constitution hangs to read, the desire Yang suppresses first, and the lens type makes a show of an etc.. Or, after the classmates change this idea, on the other hand, the score really gets an exaltation, because our composition really is press the course standard of request a little completion;But on the other hand, definite ability at these restriction rather many of make a show of in the writing frame personal to the special understanding of the worlds.This understanding only belongs to himself/herself, counteracts the way that oneself excels to express and thus and only expresses own viewpoint.Test a composition, attain this one step, is a truely excellent composition.
Macau visit to record
summer vacation, we are from the bead sea arch north seaport lead maritime customs, go to tour in Macau.Let my impression the most deep has big the representative's building in Macau three Ba memorial arch and Macau's tallest tour tower.
big three Ba the memorial arch is Asian the biggest church of more than 100 year agos, because of be burned by the fire, remains a to face to the wall, is a historic monument just at present.Although it leave one noodles high big wall, very impressive-looking grand view, seem to be specially dominant under the sun, a lot of believing people all worship here and consign many people's hope.
Macau's tallest tour tower, we are the tower crest that ascends it in the evenings.We at tallest of 360 revolve a restaurant, Be enjoying dinner and appreciating the night scene of Macau.Have the 1 F sightseeing glass in the tower crest, can allow the visitor to trample up feeling, I stand on the glass floor to hope toward sole of foot, , be really a look at many mountains small, I saw be like an ant similar Qi car, such as matchbox similar house, have a little in the felling greatly terrified.That many-storied buildings in distances all shone a light, Macau was like the ocean of light, the world of light, be like a bright bright pearl.
in Macau, we still stroll science and technology building, nation father's memorial hall in Macau, Fisherman Warf, race car museum, person hotel in Wearnes
we have fun specially happily! A junior high school tests a composition and mostly includes a few steps:Review a purpose to choose a material to strive for a layout display literary grace.Strive for a layout this one-step solution among them of is how to arrange the problem of contents that contents and performance chooses.Arrange a contents mainly is to conceive outline the big structure and big frame of article for the material chosen, but express a contents then mainly is express a student by himself/herself to the comprehension and ego personality of material.I think that this is the beginning high school student should first explicit idea. Arranging the contents is the big frame that installs an article.Test a composition but speech for one, very sad urge of, the student has to follow give square the space a word a word upwards write.(Next 88)is also say, test a composition disallows an examinee truely and thoroughly exertion.The examinee's exertion have to under the mode fixed, these writings' making a show of in the square, square,'s just positive blank would seem to be enjoy to please the eye.But this needs to strive for an effort of layout. In the process of striving for a layout, it is the most important one step to write to lift a key link.Write to lift outline to notice two contentses:On being certain article topic and main contents, two is to give the article layering the cent segment, make sure at the same time contents each ly and mostly with probably word number.This lifts a key link ignore is truely write paper up still only in mind beat into a mental notes, have to promise ability at lifts and orderly puts in the key link into want to put of contents.The parable that beats an image, be have to have a big cupboard, there is the small blank of dissimilarity in each cupboard.Have to check a time of small space after filling with each small space a contents, will fill the too full place be divided into a lately small space again, will fill once big pen in the dissatisfied place(is also make a show of to the article to say a not strong place of performance dint) flick and sign a horse to hew away.This is to arrange a contents matter that need to be done. But so-called performance contents, say white, be let to arrange with the technique of expression the good thing truely become himself/herself.The common saying says that the sun underneath has no fresh matter.Particularly to beginning the high school student but speech, a lot of contentses written by it, is the life that all big parts of persons once experienced, so-so and light write down, in fact the new experience combines not much.(particularly graded examination papers a teacher to still once see so several compositions)At this time, need how express a contents, this flower dessert to think.Because, a purpose(particularly be this article isn't science and technology text) of article mainly lies in the special understanding that expresses oneself to some fixed and unchangealbe things.This understanding on the other hand gets to°from special life experience and on the other hand gets to°from the different technique of expression.I always think that the so-called technique of expression actually is a kind of way that treats thing or says to treat a life.You are to treat the living like this, therefore, you will come so to write.You are richer than dramatic, so compare to like better that the constitution hangs to read, the adoption narrates from the end skill;Because your emotion compares to like better a description detail for sensitive with enriching, so you comparing;You are more mature, see a problem more thorough, so you like the language sentence of judgment type.All of these are your personalities, even if in testing a field, also not should drive square blank Yan have no.The student can have according to own judgment consciously train 1-2 categories technique of expression, if give thing speech ambition, the constitution hangs to read, the desire Yang suppresses first, and the lens type makes a show of an etc.. Or, after the classmates change this idea, on the other hand, the score really gets an exaltation, because our composition really is press the course standard of request a little completion;But on the other hand, definite ability at these restriction rather many of make a show of in the writing frame personal to the special understanding of the worlds.This understanding only belongs to himself/herself, counteracts the way that oneself excels to express and thus and only expresses own viewpoint.Test a composition, attain this one step, is a truely excellent composition.
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