Wednesday, December 24, 2014

Macau visit to record


Macau visit to record
summer vacation, we are from the bead sea arch north seaport lead maritime customs, go to tour in Macau.Let my impression the most deep has big the representative's building in Macau three Ba memorial arch and Macau's tallest tour tower.
big three Ba the memorial arch is Asian the biggest church of more than 100 year agos, because of be burned by the fire, remains a to face to the wall, is a historic monument just at present.Although it leave one noodles high big wall, very impressive-looking grand view, seem to be specially dominant under the sun, a lot of believing people all worship here and consign many people's hope.
Macau's tallest tour tower, we are the tower crest that ascends it in the evenings.We at tallest of 360 revolve a restaurant, Be enjoying dinner and appreciating the night scene of Macau.Have the 1 F sightseeing glass in the tower crest, can allow the visitor to trample up feeling, I stand on the glass floor to hope toward sole of foot, , be really a look at many mountains small, I saw be like an ant similar Qi car, such as matchbox similar house, have a little in the felling greatly terrified.That many-storied buildings in distances all shone a light, Macau was like the ocean of light, the world of light, be like a bright bright pearl.
in Macau, we still stroll science and technology building, nation father's memorial hall in Macau, Fisherman Warf, race car museum, person hotel in Wearnes
we have fun specially happily! A junior high school tests a composition and mostly includes a few steps:Review a purpose to choose a material to strive for a layout display literary grace.Strive for a layout this one-step solution among them of is how to arrange the problem of contents that contents and performance chooses.Arrange a contents mainly is to conceive outline the big structure and big frame of article for the material chosen, but express a contents then mainly is express a student by himself/herself to the comprehension and ego personality of material.I think that this is the beginning high school student should first explicit idea. Arranging the contents is the big frame that installs an article.Test a composition but speech for one, very sad urge of, the student has to follow give square the space a word a word upwards write.(Next 88)is also say, test a composition disallows an examinee truely and thoroughly exertion.The examinee's exertion have to under the mode fixed, these writings' making a show of in the square, square,'s just positive blank would seem to be enjoy to please the eye.But this needs to strive for an effort of layout. In the process of striving for a layout, it is the most important one step to write to lift a key link.Write to lift outline to notice two contentses:On being certain article topic and main contents, two is to give the article layering the cent segment, make sure at the same time contents each ly and mostly with probably word number.This lifts a key link ignore is truely write paper up still only in mind beat into a mental notes, have to promise ability at lifts and orderly puts in the key link into want to put of contents.The parable that beats an image, be have to have a big cupboard, there is the small blank of dissimilarity in each cupboard.Have to check a time of small space after filling with each small space a contents, will fill the too full place be divided into a lately small space again, will fill once big pen in the dissatisfied place(is also make a show of to the article to say a not strong place of performance dint) flick and sign a horse to hew away.This is to arrange a contents matter that need to be done. But so-called performance contents, say white, be let to arrange with the technique of expression the good thing truely become himself/herself.The common saying says that the sun underneath has no fresh matter.Particularly to beginning the high school student but speech, a lot of contentses written by it, is the life that all big parts of persons once experienced, so-so and light write down, in fact the new experience combines not much.(particularly graded examination papers a teacher to still once see so several compositions)At this time, need how express a contents, this flower dessert to think.Because, a purpose(particularly be this article isn't science and technology text) of article mainly lies in the special understanding that expresses oneself to some fixed and unchangealbe things.This understanding on the other hand gets to°from special life experience and on the other hand gets to°from the different technique of expression.I always think that the so-called technique of expression actually is a kind of way that treats thing or says to treat a life.You are to treat the living like this, therefore, you will come so to write.You are richer than dramatic, so compare to like better that the constitution hangs to read, the adoption narrates from the end skill;Because your emotion compares to like better a description detail for sensitive with enriching, so you comparing;You are more mature, see a problem more thorough, so you like the language sentence of judgment type.All of these are your personalities, even if in testing a field, also not should drive square blank Yan have no.The student can have according to own judgment consciously train 1-2 categories technique of expression, if give thing speech ambition, the constitution hangs to read, the desire Yang suppresses first, and the lens type makes a show of an etc.. Or, after the classmates change this idea, on the other hand, the score really gets an exaltation, because our composition really is press the course standard of request a little completion;But on the other hand, definite ability at these restriction rather many of make a show of in the writing frame personal to the special understanding of the worlds.This understanding only belongs to himself/herself, counteracts the way that oneself excels to express and thus and only expresses own viewpoint.Test a composition, attain this one step, is a truely excellent composition.

My composition in the house

My composition in the house
my member of the family have father, mother, younger sister and I, although the younger sister is aunt's house of, also calculate top!
at this family, the younger sister fears me most , I afraid father, father fears a mother again, mother again afraid younger sister,
once, I lend a book in the library, the younger sister wants to see, I don't give, she is just preparing to use to extremely recruit to cry, I ain't afraid, say you if cry, carefully I don't take you to buy thing to eat.The younger sister listenned to and laid up a gold bean at once bean don't cry.Hey Hey!Younger sister afraid I.
proper when I was happy father walked to come over to ask me:Did your homework work well?I speak hesitatingly ground to say:Have no what?Haven't worked well, grieve me, do quickly.The father vexation ground says.Ah, I have to candidly admit defeat., Going to of darling affected industry.Father finishes saying and then watches television, at this time, the mother walked to come over and said to father:Shake and control a machine to me, I want to watch a television drama.Don't go, I want to see football game.Father says.Hum, don't give BE!Carefully I stired plug and showed you to become not.Father listenned to and had to shook to control a machine to give mother, return a way Qian.Hi hi!Father is an afraid mother.When mother just and with relish watched television, the younger sister ran to come over to say to the mother:Aunt, our going shopping to have fun very and not and very doesn't go, I watch the television drama is continuously a tail of oh!The younger sister listenned to, the small mouth was one Pie, and the tears is about to drop down.The mother had to go shopping to go to with younger sister.Hey!Is the mother of head be beaten scepter!
this is my family.My composition in the house
is the material for new fire that each person hides in the heart deep place immortalization to the home town's reluctanting to part with, total the time in in the dead of night will start to remember there of pure and innocent.Probably because the home town once loaded the greatest ideal for oneself and the most sincere comity, probably because the home town had oneself cut off continuously like to mother of 1 kind naturally continues to long for, a kind of state of mind that was hard to cut off, so I to the emotion of home town always have already increased don't reduce.Want ~only at the mention of home town each time, my brain inside will appear its appearance, so below let I for everyone introduce for a while!
my home town is a knoll village that locates at in the tide Anne's county, that of the scenery talk not up have much beautiful, can that but is living me keep my place, is the cradle of my childhood years.My house lives under the foot of a hill and sees on opening the door mountain.A make reference to this mountain to hang up to have my recollection for childhood years.This mountain isn't high, can top of hill but grow full mango tree, each tree has the history in last a hundred years and get then two people can surround it.Each time till summer, I always edible to a lot of sweet and tasty mangos, although the outside also has now sell, can I still feel home town of a little bit delicious!Have in this top of hill I allow much more of childhood interesting news, remember a childhood I usually play hide-and-seek with friend in the top of hill and play on a swing and roast sweet potato and fly a kite and make wild meal that is also the good place that I toughens, remember that moment, I go to top of hill running every morning, breath fresh air, sometimes still play badminton, every day I be like this arrive the top of hill toughens and arouses spirit spirit, then greets new day of study life by the best spirit feature!To sum it up, have my many childhood recollectionses over there, do I still remember still lately up to now!
in addition to this, there are still at my home town a lot of small rivulets, that moment we all have no washer, so all of our clothes are cleaned over there at that time.A till summer, we still usually go there to swim and catch fish in sometimes still just small river, only have at the mention of home town each time, I say one surging not unique, my friend always says you simply move to return to old house calculate!Yes, although leaving an old house is very near, can I but hardly return to, for all that can, I still keep often remembering it, because the happy recollection that has my childhood years over there has the happy colleague of my childhood years and has the fine time that I allow much more childhood yearses
go home each time, I can always feel a very thick country idea, head quarter's starting to hang up me is various fine recollections to the childhood years and especially see the variety of coming home the country, I feel more delighted, I hope that my home town will be better tomorrow, and I love my home town!

Enlighten a composition

Enlighten a composition
in the life, will take place every day many affairs.Have of be like to vanish quickly, soon forget completely.But some affairs, but will deeply print in the brain, flick it not to go.
that is the occurrence the final last year a matter of the front.
because of soon final, every day in addition to review be review.I feel that Is all review roll melon lousy Be getting more familiar, so have a little absence of mind, those I basically don't put in the mind.
be a teacher to make us write from memory two ancient poems, two famous sayings of time, I three times five divided by two to soon finish writing from memory.But when the book sends down of time, am I surprised foolish for 56 centses?I doubt that my own eyes are wrong!Because since the childhood, does my result basically is all excellent, how can have so bad result?Is careful on seeing, originally I wrote two contentses of ancient poems to reverse, those two famous sayings even the author's names didn't write!I upset pole!
after going home, a person quietly introspects:Why will I test so badly?Why?The reason only has a , that is my result of proud complacence.Lucky BE, from this matter, I discovered my own problem in time, the final obtained good result.
in my study career, this is a small matter.Although, this matter passes by for a long time,gave my precept but is very big.It makes me know, none of a personal any times ability the proud and self-satisfied pride will make you lose her head, the complacence will make you lose bearing.
on aftertime's life road, I prison in the meeting prison remember:The condescension makes people progress, the pride makes people fall behind!Enlighten a composition
there is the plant of myriad shapes in the great universe, their category is numerous, the appearance is each difference, provided abundant resources and the environment of daintiness for people.Although they not ability speech, can't express, they are rich with innate intelligence, be also full of source of vitality, can not only make people produce fine fancy, but also bring many usefully inspire.
for example sunflower, it has a kind of geezer skill, can turn to spend dish along with the sunlight.I think to invent a kind of wrinkly clothes that take plait according to the characteristic of sunflower.Blazing hot summer, adjust clothes into glint sunlight and send forth calories, wear on the body will feel very pleasantly cool.Winter that is cold, adjust clothes absorb sunlight and store calories, the person will be very warm.
this kind of clothes still have a kind of function, only on putting on, hand and feet were like to put on sucker, people can be in the running about of the wall top and treetop freedom.
I can also give the tank pack and have the sheet iron of this kind of function up, when the different place fights, the tank can adjust ray and conceal oneself, can beat the enemy's soldier but dodge and attackstone so.
was full of numerous scientific knowledges in the great universe, as long as we own a pair of eyes that are good at a detection, study, can invent many things.The great universe isn't only the mankind's cradles but also the mankind's friend and teacher and studies from great universe, will let our life be getting more fine.Enlighten a composition
today, the teacher gave us each classmate to deliver a cucumber and let us uped observe lesson.
my cucumber Be straight to is straight, be like a soldier who stands guard.Is full with on the cucumber body the small sting in white, very difficult to handle.The color dark yellowish green dark yellowish green on the body of, like be dressed in a robe of green.See quickly, the cucumber overhead still grows the floret in a yellow and imitates a Buddha to wear an aureate hat.I put cucumber before nose, there is a light green grass flavor coming into nostrils since then.I slightly touched the body of touching the cucumber, the underneath of cucumber was slippery to is slippery, very cool, not big similar with last body, the top Ge pimple of the cucumber Da of, be like continuous rise and fall of hill.The cucumber touches an in luck grow too much, top that small white stings all dropped to table top.
I quickly run to the basin of prosperous water flank in the son, put into Shui-li to put out strength ground to rub a cucumber, see cucumber body up of the small white stings all be missing, was all rubbed by me, whole Piaos at surface up.I clean of 1 of cucumber Pa bye open, !Cucumber of in have many small seeds, is like the darling child of cucumber.There are many greens in the place that closes to cucumber skin of a little bit a little bit small, seem a string of pearl necklace.I put cucumber into mouth and slightly bit and slowly chewed to chew, frailty frailty of, very sweet, there is also a very thick very puckery flavor, eat really great!
cucumber not only delicious, there are also a lot of uses.Cucumber ability beauty, can also add vitamin, eat more cucumber to have advantage to our body.
a very small cucumbers all have so many functions, that we should also be like a cucumber and do a to social useful persons.

Sunday, December 21, 2014

the person whom I respect and admire most


the person whom I respect and admire most
in the road that I grow up, the person who once got in touch with is countless, let what me respected and admired most among them is us Gao Chu Xu of the class.
Gao Chu Xu grow very handsome, the very fat body sets off his honesty of and faithfulness more, eyes aren't big but vibrant, every moment project the ray of light of intelligence, and Gao Gao's bridge is on-the-shelf on paying eyes, absolutely is a scholar refined scholar for being worthy of the name.
I respect and admire Gao Chu Xu be not oral promise isn't enough, but be really moved by his actual activity.Still remember that that is a section of the grade four English lesson, Gao Chu Xu's noodles is expressionless to pass to teacher's a few English of paper, up and closely write full list phrase and text, everyone thinks that he is punished, but leads a short while a teacher but delightedly says:"Gao Chu Xu's classmate has already written from memory the whole volume books to all finish, and a single phrase all right!"At that time whole class the person was all surprised to be getting more foolish, because of that time we learned a mold piece three.
Gao Chu Xu not only make me respect and admire in the aspects of studying, in managing class work more is make me admire a ground of complete prostration.Open brigade Wei each time meeting of time, Gao Chu Xu after all in earnest listenning to, recording the regulation that the teacher says with a small book and getting to classroom, he always a word don't differ ground to bring the classmates the teacher's words.At sweep sanitary of time, Gao Chu Xu also always hurtles at most before, as long as he takes a brigade to sweep hygiene and promises that the health area has no dead angle.
Gao Chu Xu, you use to work hard and effort of study profoundly moved me, you were the person whom I respect and admire most forever! Thought in the center of article, namely topic, someone is called center or subject.(Next 88)write an article the process of thought in the establishment center is called "purpose". Thought in the center of article, means to pass to record a person and recount, write the view, form thing expresses of to the living main viewpoint, or approve, or objection, or praise, or critique. Record a Xu text in one in, thought in the establishment center is very important.Manchu Dynasty writer Yao Nai once says:"The poem text is beautiful, the life idea is necessarily kind."Thought in the center is the soul of article, thought in the center establishes write then the article of can have absolute being so much. The center thought of article has to attain fresh clear and concentrated.Is fresh clear, pointing the praise or blame of article has to definitely can not contain an unclear paste;Concentration, point to want all materials organically the organization get up, the concentration expresses an inside idea to think. A thought in the center that well records a Xu text in addition to want to be fresh clearly, concentrate, also need to attain novel and deep.The article especially tests a composition and hate most monotonous.The composition like this easily grades examination papers a teacher to feel dull, even in feel sick of, will not get a too high score.Whereas, if in"all thousand" Tu now an article with novel and deep purpose, even if other aspects aren't first-class levels, can will also good result of.

We manage the person that should thank

We manage the person that should thank
the teacher is scathing in our eyes of, make we fear of, probably we are at in home even the parents are all not afraid, but when we see a teacher and be like a rat to see cat general and became a lovely baby.
in our eyes, we saw a teacher of scathing, but didn't go to thoroughly realize a teacher to our care and love, outside the lesson the time and energy of paid.What we ascend is each before the lesson, the teachers will prepare lessons outside the lesson and still need to consider while preparing lessons whether we understand, whether can comprehend, whether progress was too quick, the teachers work is what tired!We always say that the student is the most tired, but we have again who missed the teachers of pain?
teacher Yao not only concern us on the study, on the life also concern us, whenever arrive holiday, the teachers are always continuously to give repeated advice to us to notice a safety, the after school wants to be early some to return to, don't again the outside linger and walk on the road to want to notice vehicle, must see clear, obey traffic regulations.
looking at a teacher the grey hair on the head, I silently, eyes are tiny to have fever, in my heart teacher not only is our stranger, more is us this whole life should be good good with gratitude of person.
lift your head, see to stand at the teacher on the platform, you have and discover teacher pays effort of for us?www. T 262 review:
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《the evil Qi spreads 》 novel


《the evil Qi spreads 》 novel
chapter 6
"hey!Fertile Ni net Si, did you didn't die?"
entered the youth of house to smile chillily a , then take a silk to sneer at the despise toward a youth to say not.The youth didn't realize and just looked on coldly to hope a youth who fix attention on the front.The youth who enters a house sees a fertile Ni net Si incredibly don't realize him, the corner of mouth is tiny tiny on taking out, not and greatly say again:
"Hey Hey, you get angry unimportant, anyway the father wants to send into the red college of month me, you.....Hear BE....."
say this, the youth then roars with laughter and steps long Yang of a door but, leaves 2 girl and youths to quietly stand at foolish at first.
the youth completely can not hear clearly him to say what, the mankind's language he has never learned since the childhood, complete a savage country people.The girl also discovers that the youth is something wrong at this time.Wish, the net Si little lord wasn't this character before.The net Si of the past little lord although it is said is the host's fifth son, is still a very bright youth, everyday smiles happily, and treats the whole things as if all if see dirt, the person is still quite good, but today's person have a little a little bit different.
"little lord, you are all right."
what girl concerned asked a , but discover that the youth completely ignores, then and helplessly also leaves house and goes toward the room of building lord but goes.
youth the whole individual dazed at first at this time, but he is clear, oneself should temporarily have no in danger, then another lie but under, take a rest.
"host, the circumstance of five little lords has a little mess and seem the brain harmed and had a little not in the right."
at this time inside the small house of an environment grace, the girl politely lowers the head, don't dare orthoptic in the moment sit at a middle age man of wood chair of dark yellowish green color.Man double eye tiny Mi, the eye pupil son turned to turn, then order way:
"you go first to seek a treatment teacher to five little lords to cure for a while."
middle age the man finish saying and then shut double eye, start resting and restoring energy.
"BE."
girl lightly should a , then then step a door but go.The man lightly sighed 1 and soliloquized a way:
"ah~idle away in seeking pleasure every day, some proper business not dry, this also not ability strange father."
the man finishes saying and then pipes down, is having a person outdoors at this time, would is just of youth.The youth is cold to lightly smile a , then face up take one silk uncanny, the facing distance walks.
in a moment would be for two years, the girl discovers that his/her own five little lords incredibly remember complete lose memory, and the language is also all incognizant, then start one word one teaching of word since.The youth just knows mankind's language here at this time, but will listen to combine not too will say complicated language.
oneself call fertile Ni net Si, five little lords of fertile Ni household, say to is a fertile Ni household, also not too calculate, because net Si the household of place, only a small branch that can be regarded as fertile Ni household.
at this time, net Si the vehemence of the fertile Ni is different from past, the 16-year-old net Si completely has the 89-year-old person similar shape and grow Gao also even if, the muscle of whole body is still specially obvious, and that handsome face completely can be fond of to die one big slice of young girl, can only cherish net Si the face always take inhospitality, completely not the language other people say 1.
"little lord, today is the time that registers to the college, ask me to lead the way for young master."
at this time an old that wears black western dress, double the eye is kindly, toward net Si tiny tiny a smile.The net Si ordered to nod, didn't talk, then with after death go toward a door to outside walk in the old.
I ask a son before going to bed every day:"Is the mother good?"
the son answer:"Good."
I ask again:"Mother where good?"
son meeting habitual the ground answer:"The mother grows good-looking."
then I fully satisfiedly tell a story for son.
a day evening, I ask so again of time, husband beside Du Rang:"Always ask so, all influence the son's esthetic sense."

Wednesday, December 17, 2014

Describe the composition of autumnal rains

Describe the composition of autumnal rains
the cope of night came, the breeze of deep autumn blew leaf to drop down and spread in the garden, quiet, very cool, the originally secluded yard is getting more secluded.
suddenly, a flash of lightning tore open a quite veil and tightly connected a thunder to follow, Mao of a , very that lightning flashes roll of thunder, the thunder accompanies with strong breeze.Because the strong breeze joins, those seedling sons are all pared off to bend from the waist, leaf in succession from nourish their the big tree shed off under the mother.Rain of Ta Ta was like a similar dozen of bead son down,The Hua Hua Hua Hua!Rain is like ice to traverse similar fall flop.Raindrop son Hua of rain, seem to be in the footrace.They madness of start off in a hurry from the high in the clouds, with each 9.The speed of 8 meters goes straight to toward the terminal point ground.The earth dark sinks ground and seems to be in the acceptance and wears the rinse of the autumnal rains.
people heard the dangerous signal sign the window that the horse will open and curtain to close together, from the cleft of two Lians, people see rain continuously rush toward a dozen to come over and splash on the glass, start to be suffused with a water flower.Breeze continuously from thin sew in infuse to come in, good is showing to us.The strong breeze seems to be military adviser and direct number with hundred million the raindrop battalion accounting are ever triumphant, omnipotent.But the town settles ground people and completely is free from this influence, still do-it-yourself wear the business of oneself's not yet finished.
shallowly, the raindrop is getting smaller, the strong breeze stopped roaring and shouting.The roll of thunder also disappeared.The earth resumed again quite formely.Curiosity people all came out house in succession.Looking at an open space in this rain, wash away dirt after smelling this rain of pure new atmosphere.The creations all calmed down, rain didn't have the conductor of strong breeze and became scattered have no Ji, no longer ever triumphant.Become more and more small, finally disappear gradually.
the open space after rain is so of utter darkness, the tree branch up still remains raindrop, besides which, , can not tell the trace of along while rain approach any further.At this time, appear one silk in the sky bright, is that dead silent moon to come out.People take a shower bath under the moonlight, is so of comfort.Chinese composition net famous master point reviews:
author with beautiful of language sentence, the language of expression of characteristics brings everyone an autumnal rains diagram.

our campus


our campus
our campuses are true the United States!
walk into campus, what to come into view is a flower terrace of crescent moon form first.The surroundings of flower terrace is rounded with the railing, the inside grows verdant of small grass, small grass dripping green of, is like to spread for flower terrace last green of carpet.The flower terrace inside still grows various flower of each kind and has a month quarter, has peony, has a rose and still has laurel blossom ……arrived in spring, the flower opened, a , a round and round, tuft Cu, a burst of breeze is blown, the flower drifts with the breeze and be like a butterfly at lightly moving dance, beautiful pole!
once wore flower terrace to go southward, there are two basketball courts, round the runway of basketball court up grow a high big laurel blossom tree of a , their aring like a soldier with dominant is guarding our campuses.
the southern side of the campus contain a huge ensign set, the ensign on the stage contains the flagpole that the stainless steel makes into and have one on the flagpole noodles the colorful five planets red flag drift with the breeze, this is the place that we hold to hoist a flag an argument type here every Monday.
the thing both sides of campus locate at two high big teaching buildings, the classmates have a class in the bright classroom in the comprehensiveness every day, there is a pleasure ground in the northern side of teaching building, there is"take a stroll in cloud", "high bar" and"ring" ……whenever class is over at the time that bell rang, the pleasure ground got up for the jollification.The kid has of play "take a stroll in cloud" to have of play a high bar and have of play a ring ……
we of the campus is true beautiful, I love us of campus!
make the friends accompany me to go on a blind date, see bride's side shy not to know to seek what topic correspond and then said:Your face is furry, be like a peach, attractive.She didn't listen to pure and asked my friends:What did she just say?That friends answers:She says you, all of full faces are hairs, resemble a peach... A lot of junior high schools livinged to learn into a junior high school since the childhood, even until beginning three didn't develop a good writing habit, it caused thus writing always at random but write, appear many problems.Hoping this text can give everyone some helps in this aspect, because develop a good writing habit, so as to let the article"speech it have a thing""speech it have a preface""speech it have feeling""speech it is beautiful", get a good score thus. Suggest a student the writing before spares 5-10 minutes to carry on an integrity of conceive outline, is lifting pen to have a big body programming for the writing that will soon carry on.Can according to the following step while conceiving outline. S1:Review a quasi-, sign a deep idea originally link should consider the following problem: 1, review the keyword of quasi- headline, the short language in the hint to the writing have restriction and deep idea? 2, which purposes request according to this question in composition test? 3, in the purpose for matching which is the best?(Judge from the novel and deep both side) S2:Shai good material, settle structure this the link should consider the following problem: 1, sieve material.The purpose there wills be a series of material in the heart later on.Need to carry on sieving to these materials at this time, select the best an among them. The thinking is in the best purpose, can what the materials choosing are there?Among them, which(is several) is the best ? 2, in the material with good Shai, which is main?Which is next in importance? 3, use what structure to organize material to the effect that expresses material had better?(From the turns and twists, attraction person the angle consider) S3:Solid detail, exhibition literary grace originally the link should consider the following problem: 1, concrete performance material, according to the article topic, enrich description in response to the point what detail?In the detail that should describe, beat a moving detail most is what? 2, in beginning coda and point paragraph of article, whether can increase a literary grace with the appropriate rhetoric skill? S4:Establish a little bit bright originally the link should establish for the composition a little bit bright with raise a score, consider the following problem: 1, whether beginning and coda can adopt appropriate art skill to carry on innovation? 2, whether can use a transition and look after in the article appropriate position? The writing habit developed as above, take into again in normal times to correspond step in need of the control of technique and method, truely writing can complete in one breath, is stipulating time inside completes Gao Zhi's composition, and avoid a junior high school composition familiar problem, if run, choose a material not appropriate, detailed slightly not appropriate, the structure isn't complete, too mild etc..

The plant that I respect and admire most

The plant that I respect and admire most
in the nature, hasing some plantses that is noble of quality and stubborn spirits be all worth our respecting and admiring.They are the plants that I respect and admire most .
the plant that I respect and admire most be counting plum flower first, at cold of winter, its Ao however bloom.Stubbornly greeting is cold.In the beautiful scenery being full of breeze snow, it that fresh and red color is in white snow world of one silk Jing beautiful lovely view.It stands in no fear of wind and frost, don't fear to strict cold.Bloom under the bad environment.We have already studied from it.
secondly was a small grass, the small grass was a very universal plant, all everywhere BE.Its existence environment is very bad, but it still exists luxuriantly, as long as having the place of soil, it can survive.That full mountain time wild small grass, blow to kiss in spring breeze under, more long more high.They have no fertilizer, there is no headwaters.Oneself looks for fertilizer and headwaters.No matter are all Ao however stand erect in hard environments.Sometimes, we see on the wall and grow so tuft small grass, you will marvel it is so stubborn, just still keep surviving under the environment like that.
still have one thing of planting, it is grow under the environment of desert, it is a cactus, it was all over full of a point sting, lived own protection with overall body, and it can store a great deal of water resources by oneself.Survival under the environment of complete sandy soil, where in the sandy soil, it has no nutrition, there is no water resources.But still stubborn on the hoof, it still needs to greet the baptism of strong sun every day.Under the blazing hot blazing flame, remain strong on the hoof.
have so on planting a thing, it all has an explicit target forever, that is to climb toward eminence.It is to climb a mountain a tiger, it no matter growth is what location, what environment, it insists unremittingly facing oneself's target headway, each every day each time engrave will climb toward eminence, although it very of flimsiness, it the always one-step one step slowly climbs and have no a moment lazy, regardless is a wind blows and rain beats down, is still a strict cold intense heat, it remains repeated facing oneself's target headway.But arrive that top, is its most beautiful time.
still have such a plant, it body place silt in, but can keep own cleanness.It is a lotus flower.Silt but don't dye, Zhuo pure Lian but not bewitching.These are people to its biggest praise.It is darkly like that in of a clear light.Illuminated blackness for people.It doesn't have the environment of quilt surroundings pollute, still keep keeping the honor of oneself's nobility.This is the lotus flower.
these plant above, all have own advantage, they have of can superciliously face a predicament, have of can hold out for long time of have to the target headway of can Jie body from like, be not polluted by the other people.These are the most beautiful great universe masterpieces.Order to review:
the author introduced the plants that he respects and admires most for us and passed each introduction, we understood their temperament and quality, our passing these plants could know great universe of magic.