Wednesday, December 17, 2014

our campus


our campus
our campuses are true the United States!
walk into campus, what to come into view is a flower terrace of crescent moon form first.The surroundings of flower terrace is rounded with the railing, the inside grows verdant of small grass, small grass dripping green of, is like to spread for flower terrace last green of carpet.The flower terrace inside still grows various flower of each kind and has a month quarter, has peony, has a rose and still has laurel blossom ……arrived in spring, the flower opened, a , a round and round, tuft Cu, a burst of breeze is blown, the flower drifts with the breeze and be like a butterfly at lightly moving dance, beautiful pole!
once wore flower terrace to go southward, there are two basketball courts, round the runway of basketball court up grow a high big laurel blossom tree of a , their aring like a soldier with dominant is guarding our campuses.
the southern side of the campus contain a huge ensign set, the ensign on the stage contains the flagpole that the stainless steel makes into and have one on the flagpole noodles the colorful five planets red flag drift with the breeze, this is the place that we hold to hoist a flag an argument type here every Monday.
the thing both sides of campus locate at two high big teaching buildings, the classmates have a class in the bright classroom in the comprehensiveness every day, there is a pleasure ground in the northern side of teaching building, there is"take a stroll in cloud", "high bar" and"ring" ……whenever class is over at the time that bell rang, the pleasure ground got up for the jollification.The kid has of play "take a stroll in cloud" to have of play a high bar and have of play a ring ……
we of the campus is true beautiful, I love us of campus!
make the friends accompany me to go on a blind date, see bride's side shy not to know to seek what topic correspond and then said:Your face is furry, be like a peach, attractive.She didn't listen to pure and asked my friends:What did she just say?That friends answers:She says you, all of full faces are hairs, resemble a peach... A lot of junior high schools livinged to learn into a junior high school since the childhood, even until beginning three didn't develop a good writing habit, it caused thus writing always at random but write, appear many problems.Hoping this text can give everyone some helps in this aspect, because develop a good writing habit, so as to let the article"speech it have a thing""speech it have a preface""speech it have feeling""speech it is beautiful", get a good score thus. Suggest a student the writing before spares 5-10 minutes to carry on an integrity of conceive outline, is lifting pen to have a big body programming for the writing that will soon carry on.Can according to the following step while conceiving outline. S1:Review a quasi-, sign a deep idea originally link should consider the following problem: 1, review the keyword of quasi- headline, the short language in the hint to the writing have restriction and deep idea? 2, which purposes request according to this question in composition test? 3, in the purpose for matching which is the best?(Judge from the novel and deep both side) S2:Shai good material, settle structure this the link should consider the following problem: 1, sieve material.The purpose there wills be a series of material in the heart later on.Need to carry on sieving to these materials at this time, select the best an among them. The thinking is in the best purpose, can what the materials choosing are there?Among them, which(is several) is the best ? 2, in the material with good Shai, which is main?Which is next in importance? 3, use what structure to organize material to the effect that expresses material had better?(From the turns and twists, attraction person the angle consider) S3:Solid detail, exhibition literary grace originally the link should consider the following problem: 1, concrete performance material, according to the article topic, enrich description in response to the point what detail?In the detail that should describe, beat a moving detail most is what? 2, in beginning coda and point paragraph of article, whether can increase a literary grace with the appropriate rhetoric skill? S4:Establish a little bit bright originally the link should establish for the composition a little bit bright with raise a score, consider the following problem: 1, whether beginning and coda can adopt appropriate art skill to carry on innovation? 2, whether can use a transition and look after in the article appropriate position? The writing habit developed as above, take into again in normal times to correspond step in need of the control of technique and method, truely writing can complete in one breath, is stipulating time inside completes Gao Zhi's composition, and avoid a junior high school composition familiar problem, if run, choose a material not appropriate, detailed slightly not appropriate, the structure isn't complete, too mild etc..

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