Sunday, December 21, 2014

the person whom I respect and admire most


the person whom I respect and admire most
in the road that I grow up, the person who once got in touch with is countless, let what me respected and admired most among them is us Gao Chu Xu of the class.
Gao Chu Xu grow very handsome, the very fat body sets off his honesty of and faithfulness more, eyes aren't big but vibrant, every moment project the ray of light of intelligence, and Gao Gao's bridge is on-the-shelf on paying eyes, absolutely is a scholar refined scholar for being worthy of the name.
I respect and admire Gao Chu Xu be not oral promise isn't enough, but be really moved by his actual activity.Still remember that that is a section of the grade four English lesson, Gao Chu Xu's noodles is expressionless to pass to teacher's a few English of paper, up and closely write full list phrase and text, everyone thinks that he is punished, but leads a short while a teacher but delightedly says:"Gao Chu Xu's classmate has already written from memory the whole volume books to all finish, and a single phrase all right!"At that time whole class the person was all surprised to be getting more foolish, because of that time we learned a mold piece three.
Gao Chu Xu not only make me respect and admire in the aspects of studying, in managing class work more is make me admire a ground of complete prostration.Open brigade Wei each time meeting of time, Gao Chu Xu after all in earnest listenning to, recording the regulation that the teacher says with a small book and getting to classroom, he always a word don't differ ground to bring the classmates the teacher's words.At sweep sanitary of time, Gao Chu Xu also always hurtles at most before, as long as he takes a brigade to sweep hygiene and promises that the health area has no dead angle.
Gao Chu Xu, you use to work hard and effort of study profoundly moved me, you were the person whom I respect and admire most forever! Thought in the center of article, namely topic, someone is called center or subject.(Next 88)write an article the process of thought in the establishment center is called "purpose". Thought in the center of article, means to pass to record a person and recount, write the view, form thing expresses of to the living main viewpoint, or approve, or objection, or praise, or critique. Record a Xu text in one in, thought in the establishment center is very important.Manchu Dynasty writer Yao Nai once says:"The poem text is beautiful, the life idea is necessarily kind."Thought in the center is the soul of article, thought in the center establishes write then the article of can have absolute being so much. The center thought of article has to attain fresh clear and concentrated.Is fresh clear, pointing the praise or blame of article has to definitely can not contain an unclear paste;Concentration, point to want all materials organically the organization get up, the concentration expresses an inside idea to think. A thought in the center that well records a Xu text in addition to want to be fresh clearly, concentrate, also need to attain novel and deep.The article especially tests a composition and hate most monotonous.The composition like this easily grades examination papers a teacher to feel dull, even in feel sick of, will not get a too high score.Whereas, if in"all thousand" Tu now an article with novel and deep purpose, even if other aspects aren't first-class levels, can will also good result of.

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